Review

Everyone in the world have(has) dreamed of having a lot of money, (and) having a lot of money is not a bad, the bad thing of the money is what you made(are willing to do) for to get (it.)all them and the money(Money will) never give you real friends in your life. Money can change the life of all the people easier but there are many rich people that(who) have everything that they want but are not happy. Some people are rich and have a lot of money because they're people who work hard to get it, (and) also its(these) people who love their work; it is(who are) studied and knows(know) his(their) stuff. But there are other people trying to improve their lives and their happiness with dirty money. For example, bank robbery, drug trafficking and money laundering.

When somebody make(makes) a robbery or is a drug dealer(, he is) are not happy at all because they(he) know(knows) that what they(he) do(does) is a big crime and also a sin. This(These) people have everything that you they want for example girls, mansions, exclusive cars etc. and their life is like a move(movie)(,)(;) they go to parties, VIP clubs etc. but they aren’t happy. Happiness is something that is difficult to reach from the interior of the people. You can have a lot of money and material things but it(they) can be meaningless because many things that we can reach with the money are cause of the vanity. Also it can be for society pressure and what the people will say of them.

Also whit(with) the amount of money that you have you will never get real friend(friends. You will) never have friends who appreciate you for who you are (and) not (for) what they you have. For example when you have a lot of money people might be around you just to take advantage of you. For example they(there) will be people that are your “friends” because you have the latest technology like a cell phone, computer or MP3 player. They will be your friends to lend(ask you for) them what you have(,)(.) also (There are) other people than that(who) would take advantage of you because you invite them out to the best places like restaurants, malls etc. but never because they want to share a good or fun moment with you. This kind of people that(will) give you the(their) back whey(when) you are lack of money (and) they will not help you.

So the money will (not) buy happiness, the money is only a piece of paper with a value that can buy you material things, money will never buy you love, laughs and happiness that your family and real friends gives(give) to you.