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“Fast food should be forbidden for young people under the age of 18”.

Good morning, I am a senior student of the Centro Escolar el roble, I (support) the director of the motion (that) “healthy food (should be banned) in schools”. My name is Camote and in this letter(debate) I will talk about(to) you why fast food should be forbidden for young people under the age of 18. The teenager(teenagers) that eat a lot of junk food have more risk to die early and be obese than younger people that eat more healthy food than fast food. So for that reason fast food is very bad for teenagers, but what are the real problems that fast food make(makes) in your body(.)(?) One reason(thing) is that junk food damage(damages) our body because the fast food has many fat that decontrol(affects) the balance of fat in your body and if you have more fat in your body(,) then this fat can clog your arteries. This is not a problem only for the kids(,) because this problem can affect every body. For that reason there are many people that have obesity (can) also can develop diabetes that is a very complicated disease that can affect younger(young) and old people.

Also junk food contains artificial substances that change your metabolism when(,)(.) this(This) is a big problem because when you are younger(young,) is the stage in that your metabolism is changing because you are growth(growing). People below the age of 18 are still in growth and eating that type of food won’t give the nutrients they need to grow healthy. The teenager needs more healthy food, for example proteins that can make (him) stronger and give you(him) energy for all day and (to) make all the activities that you want. The fast food doesn’t have any vitamins, proteins or carbohydrates that can help your body. For that reason the younger(young people) need some nutrients that are fundamental for our growth and the fast food wont(won’t) give all the nutrients that we need(needed). If the young people and you still eating(eat) this food, your(their) growth will be affected and you will not develop your system in a good way.

So for this(these) reasons the fast food will(should) be forbidden in all schools because (it) affect(affects) the growth of the teenagers(.) also(Also) this problems can prejudice your health when you are old. So right now you need to change in the way that you eat, for example eat more fruits and vegetables that can help you to take care your skin, vision and by(be) focused.