Review

Guatemala august 4 of 2011

Principal 50 Cents

El Roble

Mr. Cents

Greetings principal, I hope that all your projects that you are making for a better school will be in a great way. Yesterday talking whit(with) the teacher Lil Wayne(, he) tell(told) me that the school wants to create clubs for the students(,) and right now I found out that they are asking the opinion of students about what types of clubs should be created. So I thought a good idea that the school can make a “coffee club” will(which) all IB students will appreciate. This club will be to make a break when you get stressed for(from) the amount of work that the IB gives to you.

As the club(club’s) name mentions, this club will involve the distress all the students of the last year on(of) the IB who are in preparation for the quizzes in November. This club will be to get(give a) break when you are finishing the IB laboratories and you need to get a rest to recovery(recover) your health(energy). There are many ways that we can rest ourselves. It can be making(in a) room in that will have (a) coffeemaker that the students and teachers will use to prepare a coffee(.) (It will) also (need) desks and chairs in that(where) you can sit and enjoy your coffee. On the other hand it can be only the coffeemaker with a pair of couch(big chairs)(,) in that (where) the students can rest or work in the (the IB projects ) computer the IB projects.

Whit(With) all the content that give the school (gives) plus the IB, the student get stressed with all the work that (they) need to make(do), so they get with exhausted and need time to rest and that is why(how) the students (will benefit.) (Students who)that will be in the club will help(benefit from) you a lot to(of) rest and (from) share(sharing) with your(their) friends at the same time (they are) working. In this club you will study many things and it will be a review of many classes, like preparing before a quiz.

So the “coffee club” will involve the students to get distressed, take a break for(from) the school projects and have a time to share with other students. I think that putting this club will help to distract the students in a healthy and fun way. I hope that you can include this idea to(in) all the projects that you are making in the school because I think this will improve the performance of the students in the school.

Attentively:

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