Paper 2 Activity 4

Post Paper 2 Activity 4

Coffee Club

Guatemala august 4 of 2011

Principal 50 Cents

El Roble

Mr. Cents

Greetings principal, I hope that all your projects that you are making for a better school will be in a great way. Yesterday talking with the teacher Lil Wayne, he told me that the school wants to create clubs for the students, and right now I found out that they are asking the opinion of students about what types of clubs should be created. So I thought a good idea that the school can make a “coffee club” which all IB students will appreciate. This club will be to make a break when you get stressed from the amount of work that the IB gives to you.

As the club’s name mentions, this club will involve all the students of the last year of the IB who are in preparation for the quizzes in November. This club will be to give a break when you are finishing the IB laboratories and you need to get a rest to recover your energy. There are many ways that we can rest ourselves. It can be in a room that will have a coffeemaker that the students and teachers will use to prepare a coffee. It will also need desks and chairs where you can sit and enjoy your coffee. On the other hand it can be only the coffeemaker with a pair of big chairs, where the students can rest or work in the IB projects.

With all the content that the school gives plus the IB, the student get stressed with all the work that they need to do, so they get exhausted and need time to rest and that is how the students will benefit. Students who will be in the club will benefit from a lot of rest and from sharing with their friends at the same time they are working. In this club you will study many things and it will be a review of many classes, like preparing before a quiz.

So the “coffee club” will involve the students to get distressed, take a break from the school projects and have a time to share with other students. I think that putting this club will help to distract the students in a healthy and fun way. I hope that you can include this idea in all the projects that you are making in the school because I think this will improve the performance of the students in the school.

Attentively:

Sweet potato (Camote)

Review

Guatemala august 4 of 2011

Principal 50 Cents

El Roble

Mr. Cents

Greetings principal, I hope that all your projects that you are making for a better school will be in a great way. Yesterday talking whit(with) the teacher Lil Wayne(, he) tell(told) me that the school wants to create clubs for the students(,) and right now I found out that they are asking the opinion of students about what types of clubs should be created. So I thought a good idea that the school can make a “coffee club” will(which) all IB students will appreciate. This club will be to make a break when you get stressed for(from) the amount of work that the IB gives to you.

As the club(club’s) name mentions, this club will involve the distress all the students of the last year on(of) the IB who are in preparation for the quizzes in November. This club will be to get(give a) break when you are finishing the IB laboratories and you need to get a rest to recovery(recover) your health(energy). There are many ways that we can rest ourselves. It can be making(in a) room in that will have (a) coffeemaker that the students and teachers will use to prepare a coffee(.) (It will) also (need) desks and chairs in that(where) you can sit and enjoy your coffee. On the other hand it can be only the coffeemaker with a pair of couch(big chairs)(,) in that (where) the students can rest or work in the (the IB projects ) computer the IB projects.

Whit(With) all the content that give the school (gives) plus the IB, the student get stressed with all the work that (they) need to make(do), so they get with exhausted and need time to rest and that is why(how) the students (will benefit.) (Students who)that will be in the club will help(benefit from) you a lot to(of) rest and (from) share(sharing) with your(their) friends at the same time (they are) working. In this club you will study many things and it will be a review of many classes, like preparing before a quiz.

So the “coffee club” will involve the students to get distressed, take a break for(from) the school projects and have a time to share with other students. I think that putting this club will help to distract the students in a healthy and fun way. I hope that you can include this idea to(in) all the projects that you are making in the school because I think this will improve the performance of the students in the school.

Attentively:

sweet potato (camote)

CC: "Coffee Club"

Guatemala august 4 of 2011

Principal 50 Cents

El Roble

Mr. Cents

Greetings principal, I hope that all your projects that you are making for a better school will be in a great way. Yesterday talking whit the teacher Lil Wayne tell me that the school wants to create clubs for the students and right now I found out that they are asking the opinion of students about what types of clubs should be created. So I thought a good idea that the school can make a “coffee club” will all IB students will appreciate. This club will be to make a break when you get stressed for the amount of work that the IB gives to you.

As the club name mentions, this club will involve the distress all the students of the last year on the IB who are in preparation for the quizzes in November. This club will be to get break when you are finishing the IB laboratories and you need to get a rest to recovery your health. There are many ways that we can rest ourselves. It can be making room in that will have coffeemaker that the students and teachers will use to prepare a coffee also desks and chairs in that you can sit and enjoy your coffee. On the other hand it can be only the coffeemaker with a pair of couch, in that the students can rest or work in the computer the IB projects.

Whit all the content that give the school plus the IB, the student get stressed with all the work that need to make, so they get with exhausted and need time to rest and that is why the students that will be in the club will help you a lot to rest and share with your friends at the same time working. In this club you will study many things and it will be a review of many classes, like preparing before a quiz.

So the “coffee club” will involve the students to get distressed, take a break for the school projects and have a time to share with other students. I think that putting this club will help to distract the students in a healthy and fun way. I hope that you can include this idea to all the projects that you are making in the school because I think this will improve the performance of the students in the school.

Attentively:

sweet potato (camote)

Paper 2 Activity 3

Post Paper 2 Activity 3

Dear Camote

Guatemala August 4 of 2011

Dear Camote.

How are you? I haven’t heard from you for a few of months. My father called your dad yesterday and he told him that you are studying at the Centro Escolar El Roble right nowand that you are in the first year of the IB studies. I know what you are feeling and what you are thinking about the IB because I also went through the same and this is my last year of IB before the quizzes. It has become very difficult and I have to do my best in all the classes because my IB exams are in November, and if you look right now it is September, only two months for the quizzes!! And there are many things that I have to study and make the final corrections in the laboratories and projects. I write this letter because your father told my father that the IB has become a pain in the neck for you because you don’t find the how to administrate your time doing the laboratories and mayor projects for the IB plus the homework that all the teachers give you every day and that you are disorganized and can’t prepare what to do in the afternoon when you are at home, so you get depressed for the amount of work and you don’t finish any homework or laboratory very well, so then you get a low grade in both activities.

I recommend you to buy an agenda or if you have it take notes of all the tasks that the teachers give to you in both homework and IB projects. This will help you to organize the homework of the week and day, so you will be able to know what to do and for what day you must deliver the homework to the teacher and if you do this, you will have more time to correct all the assignments and improve the score. I recommend you to pay more attention to the classes and take all the notes possible because the IB opens new gates of opportunities to study in a great university around the world and also in your life when you are looking for a good job.

So in these two years of IB, you have to prepare yourself, don’t waste your time in other things that can distract you, find a balance between rest and work on the IB projects because you have to prepare yourself because the amount of hours that you have to study is enormous. I think with patience you will make a good job and you will get the diploma.

Good-bye.

Review

(Date)

(Dear xxxxxx),

Hi Camote! How are you? I don’t(haven’t) know(herad) about(from) you for a few of months. My father calls(called) your dad yesterday and (he) tell(told) him that you right now your are study(studying) on(at) the Centro Escolar El Roble (right now) and that you are in the first year of the IB studies(,)(.) I know what are you (are) feeling and what (you) are thinking about the IB because I also went through the same and this is my last year of IB before the quizzes. It has become very difficult and I have to do my best in all the classes because my IB exams are in November, and if you look right now (it) is September, only two months for the quizzes!! And there are many things that I have to study and make the final corrections in the laboratories and projects. I write this letter because your father tell(told) my father that the IB (has) became(become) a pain in the (neck)brain for you(,) because you don’t find (the way) how to administrate your time doing the laboratories and mayor projects for the IB plus the homework that all the teachers give you every day and that you are disorganized and don’t(can’t) prepare what to do in the afternoon when you are at home, so you get impressed(depressed) for the amount of work and you don’t finish any homework or laboratory very well, so then you get a low grade in the both work(activities).

I recommend to you (to) buy (an agenda) or if you have it an agenda, take note(notes) of all your(the) task(tasks) that the teachers give to you in the both works (homework and IB projects(.)) this(This) will help you to organize the homework of the week and day, so you will be able to know what to do and for what day you must deliver the homework to the teacher and if you do this, you will have more time to correct al(all) the homework’s(assignments) and improve the score. I recommend you to put(pay) more attention (to) the classes and take all the notes possible because the IB opens new gates of opportunities to study in a great university around the world and also in your life when (you) are looking for a good job.

So in this(these) two years of IB(,) you have to prepare yourself, don’t miss(waste) your time in other things that can distract you, find a balance in(between) rest yourself and working(work) on the IB projects because yo(you) have to prepare yourself because the amount of hours that you have to study is enormous. I think with patience you will make a good job and you will get the diploma.

Good-bye.

Hi Camote! How are you? I don’t know about you for a few of months. My father calls your dad yesterday and tell him that you right now your are study on the Centro Escolar El Roble and that you are in the first year of the IB studies, I know what are you feeling and what are thinking about the IB because I also went through the same and this is my last year of IB before the quizzes. It has become very difficult and I have to do my best in all the classes because my IB exams are in November, and if you look right now is September, only two months for the quizzes!! And there are many things that I have to study and make the final corrections in the laboratories and projects.

I write this letter because your father tell my father that the IB became a pain in the brain for you, because you don’t find how to administrate your time doing the laboratories and mayor projects for the IB plus the homework that all the teachers give you every day and that you are disorganized and don’t prepare what to do in the afternoon when you are at home, so you get impressed for the amount of work and you don’t finish any homework or laboratory very well, so then you get a low grade in the both work.

I recommend to you buy or if you have it an agenda, take note of all your task that the teachers give to you in the both works (homework and IB projects) this will help you to organize the homework of the week and day, so you will be able to know what to do and for what day you must deliver the homework to the teacher and if you do this, you will have more time to correct al the homework’s and improve the score.

I recommend you to put more attention the classes and take all the notes possible because the IB opens new gates of opportunities to study in a great university around the world and also in your life when are looking for a good job.

So in this two years of IB you have to prepare yourself, don’t miss your time in other things that can distract you, find a balance in rest yourself and working on the IB projects because yo have to prepare yourself because the amount of hours that you have to study is enormous. I think with patience you will make a good job and you will get the diploma.

Good-bye.

Review

Date should be informal.
Body paragraph 1 should talk about a problem your friend is having and that is affecting his studies in the IB.
Body paragraph 2 should talk about your advice in order to solve the problem or how he can deal with it so it doesn't interfere with his studies.
(Read the task again so you can see what I mean.)