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Mobile phones for students, should or should not they be banned at school?

Nowadays there is an increment in the percentage of teenagers using the cell phone in the school and this produces a bad performance in all the subjects. The reasons why this is happening are that they will have dependence, distraction with games and bad use of a cell phone. When you see a student with his phone is because he has dependence with the pone, so he then develops an addiction and the student will find the necessity to have the phone near to him. Students that have their phones with them every day make a distraction in the school. This distraction is caused by the games that the students download to their phones and they will play with them all day, so that causes a distraction on the student who won't pay attention to what the teacher is saying. Finally the students don’t know the real function of a cell phone in the school. They think that the only function that the phone has is playing games and chatting all day with a lot of people. The real function of a phone is to call someone in the family if there is an emergency, that is the real function but the students don’t use the cell phone for that. So in my opinion the use of cell phones in school should be banned because the students don’t make good use of it, causing distraction and dependence.

Review

Mobile phones for students(,) should or should not (they) be banned at school?

Nowadays there is an increment in the percentage of teenagers using the cell phone in the school and this produce(produces) a bad performance in all the subjects. The reasons why this is happening is(are) that they will have dependence, distraction with games, bad use of a cell phone. When you see a student with his phone is because he have(has) a dependence with the pone, so they(he) then develops an addiction and the student will find the necessity to have the phone near to them(him). Students that have his(their) phone(phones) with him(them) every day make a distraction in the school. This distraction is caused by the games that the student(students) download to his(their) phone(phones) and they will play with his(them) phone all day, so that cause(causes) a distraction on the student when he is in the classroom and the student don’t (who won't) pay attention (to) what the teacher is saying. Finally the students don’t know the real function of a cell phone in the school. They think that (the) only function that has the phone (has) is play(playing) games and chat(chatting) all day with a lot of people. The real function (of a phone) is for(to) call someone in the family if there is an emergency, that is the real function but the students don’t use the cell phone for that. So in my opinion the use of cell phones in school should be banned because the students don’t provide a (make) good use (of it)(,) cause(causing) distraction and dependence.

Mobile phones for students should or should not be banned at school?

Nowadays there is an increment in the percentage of teenagers using the cell phone in the school and this produce a bad performance in all the subjects. The reasons why this is happening is that they will have dependence, distraction with games, bad use of a cell phone. When you see a student with his phone is because he have a dependence with the pone, so they then develops an addiction and the student will find the necessity to have the phone near to them. Students that have his phone with him every day make a distraction in the school. This distraction is caused by the games that the student download to his phone and they will play with his phone all day, so that cause a distraction on the student when he is in the classroom and the student don’t pay attention what the teacher is saying. Finally the students don’t know the real function of a cell phone in the school. They think that only function that has the phone is play games and chat all day with a lot of people. The real function is for call someone in the family if there is an emergency, that is the real function but the students don’t use the cell phone for that. So in my opinion the use of cell phones in school should be banned because the students don’t provide a good use, cause distraction and dependence.

Writing Activity 6

Write a paragraph where you persuade you reader whether the use of mobile phones for students should or should not be banned at school.

How do hurricanes affect the economy of United States of America?

Every year when the winter comes, some states in USA are in stage of emergency because of the hurricane season that hurts their cities and destroys all that is in its way. Years ago the USA was hurt by three of the most powerful hurricanes of the history which were Katrina, Wilma and Rita. These hurricanes affected the economy of the country with property damage, unemployment and the destruction of the oil industry. Every year, hurricanes destroy homes and property. Only one hurricane causes millions of dollars in damage to housing and other buildings. Many of these structures finish completely demolished so they have to be cleaned up and then rebuilt. That is an extremely costly process because it takes time and money. After the damage of buildings comes the unemployment issue that is the effect of the many offices and industries that the hurricanes demolish, so the people who work at those businesses that are destroyed or even temporally shut down (become unemployed). Unemployment also hurts the local economy because they will not spend in the same way and this lack of spending can also lead to even more businesses closing and promote more unemployment. Oil companies are included in the way of hurricanes which sometimes destroy oil rigs, refineries and pipe lines. Oil companies will then have to partially halt production and make repairs and the result is higher prices for gas and fuel. The increase of price affects the costs of many goods and services they use every day. The amount of damage hurricanes leave on their path causes negative effects on the US economy. The number of annual hurricanes is on the rise and will be more damaging each year.

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How (do) hurricanes affect the economy of United States of America?

Every year when the winter is coming(comes), some states in USA are in stage of emergency by(because of the hurricane season) a hurricane that hurts their city(cities) that(and) destroys all that is his(in its) way. The USA years(Years) ago (the USA) was hurt by tree(three) of the most powerful hurricanes of the history that(which were) are Katrina, Wilma and Rita. This(These) hurricane(hurricanes) affects(affected) the economy of the country with property damage, unemployment and (the destruction of the) oil industries(industry). Every year, hurricanes destroy homes and property. Only one hurricane causes millions of dollars in damage to housing and other buildings. Many of these structures finish completely demolished so they will have to be cleaned up and them(then) rebuilt(.) that(That) is and(an) extremely costly process because (it) take(takes) time and money. After the damage of buildings becomes(comes) the unemployment (issue) that is the effect of the many office(offices) and industries that the hurricane(hurricanes) demolished(demolish), so the people who worked(work) at (those) businesses that are destroyed or even temporally shut down (become unemployed). Unemployment also hurt(hurts) the local economy because they will not spend in the same way and this lack of spending can also lead to even more businesses closing and make(promote) more unemployment. The oil(oil) industries(companies) are included in the way of hurricanes(,) (which) sometimes destroy oil rigs, refineries and pipe lines. Oil companies will them(then) have to partially halt production and make repairs and the result is higher prices for gas and fuel(.) and the(The) increased(increase) of price affect(affects) the costs of many good(goods) and services they used(use) every day. The amount of damage hurricanes (leave on their path) causes negative effects on the US economy. The number of annual hurricanes is on the rise and will be more damage(damaging) each year.

How hurricanes affect the economy of United States of America?

Every year when the winter is coming, some states in USA are in stage of emergency by a hurricane that hurts their city that destroys all that is his way. The USA years ago was hurt by tree of the most powerful hurricanes of the history that are Katrina, Wilma and Rita. This hurricane affects the economy of the country with property damage, unemployment and oil industries. Every year, hurricanes destroy homes and property. Only one hurricane causes millions of dollars in damage to housing and other buildings. Many of these structures finish completely demolished so they will have to be cleaned up and them rebuilt that is and extremely costly process because take time and money. After the damage of buildings becomes the unemployment that is the effect of the many office and industries that the hurricane demolished, so the people who worked at businesses that are destroyed or even temporally shut down. Unemployment also hurt the local economy because they will not spend in the same way and this lack of spending can also lead to even more businesses closing and make more unemployment. The oil industries are included in the way of hurricanes, sometimes destroy oil rigs, refineries and pipe lines. Oil companies will them have to partially halt production and make repairs and the result is higher prices for gas and fuel and the increased of price affect the costs of many good and services they used every day. The amount of damage hurricanes causes negative effects on the US economy. The number of annual hurricanes is on the rise and will be more damage each year.

What is better? Wendy's or Mcdonald's

The hamburgers from Wendy’s and McDonald's give you different things. They havedifferences an similarities in the size of the hamburgers, variety in extra food and the shape of the meat. The size of the hamburgers in Wendy’s is more exaggerated; for example they have the ¾ lb triple hamburger that is three meat cakes and the Double cheese bacon deluxe that is two meat cakes, double cheddar cheese and bacon. On the other hand McDonald's only gives you its specialty is the big mac and the big tasty ; the first has one meat cake, tomato, lettuce and cheese and the other is the same but this one has a special stake sauce. Both restaurants offer combos. In McDonald's they are more varied. You can include in your combo mac potatoes and sundae ice creams and in Wendy’s chilly beans and cinnamon rolls that you can combine in every combo that you would chose. And finally the shape of the meat cake. In Wendy’s they use a square shape and in McDonald's they use the circular shape. Something that is similar between these hamburgers is that these two places use Heinz ketchup and the size of the soda.So the buyer should consider these points when deciding a hamburger to eat.

Internal Evaluation

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Review

The hamburgers from Wendy’s and McDonalds’(McDonald's) give you different things. They have difference(differences) and similarities in (the) size of (the) hamburgers, variety in extra food and the shape of the meat. The size of (the) hamburgers in Wendy’s are(is) more exaggerated(;) for example they have(:) (the) ¾ lb triple hamburger that are(is) three meat cakes and the Double cheese bacon deluxe that are(is) two meat cakes, double cheddar cheese and bacon. On the other hand MacDonald’s(McDonald's) only gives youhis(its) specially(specialty) that is the big mac and the big tasty(;) that the firsthave(has) one meat cake, tomato, lettuce and cheese and the other is the same but this onehave(has) a special stake sauce. However(Both restaurants offer) the combos(.)in(In)MacDonald(McDonald's they are more varied.) you(You) can include in your combo mac potatoes and sundae ice cream(creams) and in Wendy’s chilly beans and cinnamonroll(rolls) that you (can) combined(combine) in every combo that you would chose. And finally the shape of the meat cake(.) in(In) Wendy’s they use a square shape and (in)MacDonald’s(McDonald's they use) us like other the circular shape. Something that is similar between these hamburgers is that these two places use Heinz ketchup and the size of the soda. So the buyer will(should) consider these points when deciding a hamburger to eat.

Wendy's vs Mcdonalds

The hamburgers from Wendy’s and McDonalds’ give you different things. They have difference and similarities in size of hamburgers, variety in extra food and the shape of the meat. The size of hamburgers in Wendy’s are more exaggerated for example they have: ¾ lb triple hamburger that are three meat cakes and the Double cheese bacon deluxe that are two meat cakes, double cheddar cheese and bacon. On the other hand MacDonald’s only gives you his specially that is the bigmac and the big tasty that the first have one meat cake, tomato, lettuce and cheese and the other is the same but this one have a special stake sauce. However the combos in MacDonald you can include in your combo mac potatoes and sundae ice cream and in Wendy’s chilly beans and cinnamon roll that you combined in every combo that you would chose. And finally the shape of the meat cake in Wendy’s they use a square shape and MacDonald’s us like other the circular shape. Something that is similar between these hamburgers is that these two places use Heinz ketchup and the size of the soda. So the buyer will consider these points when deciding a hamburger to eat.