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Nowadays the people when(When people) visit another country for the first time(,) (they) will have many new experiences that (will) make an impact and emotions in your(their) life(lives). If (it) is your first travel and (you) go with your family(,) (it) is much better than go(going) alone because all (of you) can share their(the) emotions in(of) the travel(trip). For example if you will travel with your family for the first time(,) and you will go with your family find a place, a city or a country that you know that your will share a good and funny time with your family that will be unforgettable.

For example one(two) of those beautiful places is(are) Orlando Florida and Miami. I went there in the winter of 2005 and I lived with my family many experiences that caused an impact in my life(.) (I enjoyed things) like riding big and gigantic rollercoaster’s(rollercoasters) and (walking in) the big amusement parks in Orlando(.) that there are many for different experiences and in(In) Miami (I loved) the beautiful beaches with white sand and blue water. All this adventure will be related(was about) to share(sharing) a good time (with my family) and get(having) fun.

In the 2005 when I go(went) to my first amusement park in Orlando that was Island Of Adventure, before enter(entering) the park I thought that it was going to be like Xetulul: only one big rollercoaster, a small place and big lines, but when (I) enter(entered) to the park(,) I started to see (the) biggest thematic buildings and (to hear) Christmas music that make(made) you feel happy in every part of the park(.) and when(When) you walk(walked) to any corner(,) (there) will(would) be some people dancing or a some mime playing with the people or some magician making an magic act.

So when you see all the people dancing, laughing and smiling(.)(,) All(all) that(those) things make you know and feel that life is the most important thing that exists and you are lucky to be alive. The other place that you need to visit when you travel with your family is Miami(,) because (there) is a white sand beach(,) ((it) is cool because in Guatemala (beaches are of) is black sand)(.) the white(White) sand is amazing because you can see the crystal water where you can see many things like the fishes that swim around and that make(made) an impact on me because I started to play with the fishes. So in every travel(trip) that you make will cause you a different impression (on you), bad or good. Something will be the reason why you remember something in specific like a beautiful moment with your family that you will always remember.